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You're reviewing a landing page for an idea that hasn't been built yet. The page's only job is to get the right people to sign up or pre-order, so I can learn whether they want it.

Be direct. For each point, quote the words you'd change and give a rewrite.
1. In one sentence, who is this for and what does it do? If you can't tell, say so.
2. Is the headline under 12 words, and does it name the people and the payoff?
3. Is there exactly one next step (one button), and does it match what I'm testing?
4. What would a skeptic in this audience ask that the page doesn't answer?
5. Cut anything vague ("revolutionary", "seamless", "AI-powered") that doesn't say what happens.

Here's my page:

Help me plan 15-minute interviews to learn whether people really have the problem my idea solves. Follow "The Mom Test": ask about their past behavior, never their opinion of my idea, and don't pitch until the end.

Give me:
1. Six questions in order, starting with "Tell me about the last time…".
2. Two follow-ups for when someone answers in generalities ("I usually…").
3. What a strong signal sounds like (money or time already spent) versus a weak one (compliments, "I'd use that").
4. One closing ask for a real next step: a sign-up, a pre-order or an intro.

My idea, and who it's for:

You're helping me decide whether to keep going with an idea, change it, or stop. Below is everything people said. Be honest, not encouraging.

1. Group what they said into themes. For each theme: how many people, and one short quote.
2. Separate people in my target audience from everyone else, and say if they disagree.
3. List the strongest evidence that people want this (things they did or paid), and the strongest evidence that they don't.
4. Flag anything that's only politeness ("cool idea!").
5. End with: keep going, change it, or stop, and the one thing that would change your mind.

My goal and stop point, then the feedback: